Directors and managers of organizations are often older people. Some people say that it is better for younger people to be leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Usually, the heads of corporations are elderly people. Many believe that this should change, therefore young people should take higher positions. In my opinion, senior people should continue to head various departments due to the various reasons outlined in this essay.
Old people bring with them rich experience in various fields as compared to the young generation. Which is vital for one who is on a decision-making post. For instance, in the engineering field, one learns a lot of new things in a daily routine and a fresher is appointed the chief engineer of the department he will eventually make wrong decisions because of lack of experience.
Not only that, senior members are calmer and composed as compare to their young counterparts and hence they will not decide hurriedly on important matters. That is why various firms hire retired personnel to run the company. For example, Kirloskar one of the pioneer in electric generators has recently appointed Retired Army chief as its chief executive officer.
The elder people have more sense of responsibility, as they are running their household for many years. In contrast, youngsters lack a sense of responsibility which is very essential when someone is on a decision-making post. Lastly, people listen to senior members of society and care for their views which also tits the balance in favor of them.
In conclusion, young people should be given time to inherit the needed skills so that when the time comes they would not struggle while making difficult decisions. Therefore, the services of our retirees are essential and the country desperately needs them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, lastly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20454545455 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82111284531 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2693518159 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117156816194 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406879549029 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323899663246 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632450726567 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277225983862 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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