Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single.
Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful.
Others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although it is sometimes asked in recruitment papers to fill a range of personal information like favorite entertainments or marital status. there is always heated debate among many around this topic. In my opinion, I consider that these data are essential for any corporation for its security and even to fulfill their prospects.
On the one hand, many people think that it is vital to inquire from candidates for a job to write down their private data, like a list of amusements and matrimony situation in information forms, and I am totally agree. In the other words, these data will help employer to analyze their workforce and have an inclusive view of their personality, lifestyles and even their mental conditions. having better knowledge of an employee is useful, for example, when a person’s family lives in abroad, the manager completely know what are the incentives for this person and the amount of job satisfaction will be. Furthermore, a pool of hired person’s data, which includes private ones, is necessary when a staff does a security mistake and runs away. this kind of information enhance the Police officer’s detections to find the offender and even cause staffs not do illegal mistakes.
On the other hand, it is sometimes believed that it is better if people not been asked for personal information in recruitment forms because in human resources there might be an aggressor whom misuses these specific information due to profit motive. Eventually victims might be in a catastrophic situation, which disrupts her or him, work/life balance.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that the more employee’s personal information, the higher grades of company's succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26523297491 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00105110417 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605734767025 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6810141911 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.545454545 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304373726487 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100855995714 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628831081728 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171222072871 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312375136042 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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