Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this may be relevant and useful. Others disagree,
discuss both views and your own opinion.
According to some job applicants, when applying for a job it is essential for the company to inquire about marital status, hobbies and areas of amusement of the candidates. I agree with this view, In my opinion, knowing more about the applicant could assist the employers to select the most suitable profile. Moreover, this additional information could also give the employees various opportunities at work.
Mentioning all the extra details related to one's personality definitely helps the employer to appoint best. If an applicant lists their marital status and hobbies, the company can match these points and can easily compare the shortlisted people on the basis of these extra details. For instance, an employer who is looking for someone for a frequent on-site traveling job will give more preference to a person whose area of interest is traveling and who is single. Also, employees with passions in sports and entertainment can participate in competitions, functions and all hand meetings.
On the other hand, some believe that it is not relevant to mention marital status and interests while applying. Their argument is that their unrelated hobbies might get them judged adversely by the panel. Moreover, studies have shown that a married person is often less flexible and leaves the job if asked to travel frequently. Thus people don't feel confident in mentioning their hobbies and marital status.
To conclude, a person should feel confident about sharing his or her passions and marital status because this would undoubtedly help them in their career as they progress. Consequently, not sharing these details with the employer might make their selection difficult as these extracurricular activities and skills provide a person an edge over the others who have applied with the same level of experience and qualifications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32191780822 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81755880916 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3506062336 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255889550639 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832553475821 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500954811072 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150349259582 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282363534125 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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