Euthanasia, or mercy killing, has been a controversial issue for many years. Although many people are strongly against such a practice, there is a growing demand to have it legalised. How far do you agree with euthanasia is being made legal?
The concept of mercy killing that is deliberately killing oneself for the sake of easing his pain, is increasing. Growing concerns are becoming heated question among people that euthanasia must be made legitimate as it is useless to spend huge amount of money to treat incurable disease. Despite this, it is disagreed because palliative care would eventually disappear. Moreover psychiatric disorders would also seek euthanasia as the only solution. This essay will discuss adverse effects if mercy killing will be legalised.
Firstly, mercy killing is inhuman. Terminally ill patients who require palliative treatment to ease their pain will intentionally or deliberately push towards euthanasia to end their sufferings either by medical staff or relatives. According to a research paper published by " Institution of Palliative care" in 2016 states that less than one third of patient demand for mercy killing due to pain remaining are those who are dependable on others for basic activities and our less hopeful for life. Thus, it is clear that mercy killing will negatively influence the patient to kill their life instead to seek palliative care or counselling to return back to normal life.
Secondly, evolving concerns would also incline patients suffering with psychiatric disorder such as depression, anxiety and schizophrenia to seek mercy killing as the last resort. A recent survey conduct in India concludes that after mercy killing becoming a law, more than 80% of cases received in court are pertain to psychiatric illness. Consequently, rather than patient following for medical treatment moves towards door of court and if their petition is not obliged they commit suicide. As a result suicide ration increases by 20%. The argument that euthanasia must be legalised can be debunked as it will increases the ratio of other factors which are difficult to control if sustained.
To conclude, euthanasia and mercy killing practices are growing and debated on various platforms. Legalisation of such act will under mine palliative treatment and increase suicide ratios among specifically among psychiatric patients if their request are not obliged because their state of mind is already in a situation where they seek medical advice. Hence, life is a precious gift from almighty and he is knows what is best for his mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8035017505 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7307765562 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7058823529 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141167252415 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05039224766 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039408933281 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956963636382 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300222207008 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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