Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can government do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
Many world’s leading experts believe that every part of the Earth has been damaged to an extent. Although environmental destruction has been caused entirely by humans, there are several steps and measures that can cease these problems.
The greatest wave of human activities brings about a lot of dilemmas related to the environment. Over consumption of earth’s resources, animal and plant habitats destruction, and waste of energy are issues that if not manage in an appropriate way, then we will face dire consequences for the planet. For example, human have destroyed numerous creatures' home due to agriculture, industrialization, contamination of marine systems, etc. In addition, waste can emit hazardous toxins into the environment and pollute lands and water.
There is no doubt that governments could certainly make effective conscious steps. Using renewable energies such as solar system, water power and wind farms could environmentally reduce the consumption of earth’s resources like fossil fuels as well as develop better air conditions. Besides, what people obey the rules is definitely submitted by politicians and administrators. Therefore, people must follow the orders to protect their residences, according to save the planet.
Individuals can take a few steps to help better the world. Firstly, people by voting for politicians who are more passionate about protecting the planet, can play a very important role in their lives. Secondly, the management of wastes in water, paper, and materials, etc practically lead to a superior circumstance for each person. For example, installing a flow-water shower or employing reusable shopping bags extremely affect the globe.
In conclusion, devastating the atmosphere will absolutely be an area of concern in coming years that governments and people must take a part to avoid severe troubles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63732394366 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14969660013 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68661971831 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4967736363 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17046995428 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520054759791 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397370430509 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816900599552 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183332269184 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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