In general people do not have a such a close relationship with their neighbors as they did in the past. Why this is so and what can be done to improve contacts with neighbors.

Essay topics: In general people do not have a such a close relationship with their neighbors as they did in the past. Why this is so and what can be done to improve contacts with neighbors.

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Gone are the days when people had had very close relationships with their neighbor and were part of their social lives. Nowadays, people often do not even know their neighbors and in consequence they live much more isolated lives. If this change will continue with the same pace, then materialistic values will prevail over the humanitarian ones. Hence, some important initiatives should be taken by community people to preserve these values.

Let us start with elucidating some of the main factor behind deteriorating relationship among people living in same colony. Firstly, life of all individuals has become so busy that they do not have time to think about others. Owing of inflation, a man has to work for longer hours and they left with very little time and they prefer to spend it with their family or with their own. Hence, they do not have time to spend with their fellow citizen. For instance, being a working lady, I do not find time to interact with our neighbors, even many people living in our neighborhood are alien to me. Secondly, people even do not like intervening of others in their life and ignore the people, even who are living nearby their place.

However, it should not be ignored that neighbor can play a great role to help us, if we are in the need of something. To exemplify, if a person is alone at your home at a time and unfortunately have a heart attack, then a good neighbor can take you at the hospital and can save your life. Hence, people should try to improve their neighborhood relationship. For this, people can make their neighbors part of their family occasions like birthday parties or can celebrate their festivals together. This practice can make them comfortable with each other. Apart from this, councils of local community should plan different events on weekends, where all people of that community should be invited. This can give residents chance to get accustomed with each other.

To conclude, although, people are really busy to earn bread and butter for their family, they should not let neighborhood affiliation to diminish to an extent that it may prove bane in case of emergencies where good fellowship can become blessing for them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the days when people had had very close...
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Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
Gone are the days when people had had very close relationships with their nei...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...alues. Let us start with elucidating some of the main factor behind deteriorating relati...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'apart from', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in fact']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221686746988 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.171084337349 0.155533422707 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0626506024096 0.0946595960268 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0674698795181 0.0501214627716 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0819277108434 0.0437548338989 187% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.120481927711 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0361445783133 0.0403226058552 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5766900387 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0361445783133 0.0326793684256 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0674698795181 0.0861772015684 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0409638554217 0.021408717616 191% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00963855421687 0.011925033212 81% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2201.0 1933.35771543 114% => OK
No of words: 375.0 316.048096192 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86933333333 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317333333333 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.186666666667 0.28420135186 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157333333333 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112 0.137316102897 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5766900387 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.037074148 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 60.6157419444 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8333333333 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3618683781 49.517814964 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.277777778 127.492653851 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.814263465372 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 39.5 49.1944974215 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.18045112782 1.69124875643 70% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428493251066 0.332605444948 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111265133998 0.102741220458 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0829639045367 0.0668466124924 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473302231294 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149125889625 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153143055512 0.134430193775 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516341716584 0.0742795772207 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311734508831 0.324371583561 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.019857910461 0.0638462369009 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274451472936 0.228012699653 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741631803598 0.058150111329 128% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 1.9629258517 357% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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