With a growing word population one of the most pressing issue is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With a growing word population one of the most pressing issue is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">The most important issue these days is the shortage of the availability of the food due to increase in population all over the world. While many people feel that the issue could be resolved with genetically modified foods, others think that it is not good for health. In my opinion, GM food is not a feasible solution because it is detrimental to human body and it requires a lot of technical knowledge.

There are plethora of reasons for not using GM food as a substitute. One major drawback is that these eatables are not grown naturally and hence may not possess the valuable nutrients required for healthy life. Consumption of these unnatural food items will result in the further growth of already existing life threatening diseases. Therefore, these kind of consumables are a threat to human health. For instance, cancer has widely spread due to consumption of man-made items.

Another obvious demerit with GM food is that could be grown only by those people who are technically sound. Moreover, the farmers are generally poor and cannot afford to learn the processes and procedures of growing modified food. This will restrict the availability of these items in limited areas where the farmers are rich or get support from authorities, thereby, not providing a permanent resolution for shortage of food supply.

In conclusion, according to me, GM production is not the ultimate remedy for sufficient food supply for growing population as it enhances the risk of life and also, only financially able people will be able to use this technique.</span><br>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22692307692 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18441796118 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9746669108 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167934092716 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588677397446 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381679590309 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105199957004 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390958835649 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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