With a growing world population, one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that providing food to everyone is a problem that can be tackled by genetically modifying the food. Although some people think that it is not the best solution, however, I strongly believe that it is because of three main reasons.
Firstly, the genetically modified vegetable and fruits are available through out the year. Even though some people argue that since these foods are not cultivated during the proper season, so they may not be healthy. However, these foods are not only healthy but also free from pesticides as they are grown under special conditions. Therefore, now a days people can get summer commodities in winters and vice versa.
Secondly, the positive effect on the economy of a countries that are practicing it. The farms using the latest techniques may create both blue and white collar jobs resulting in reducing the unemployment ratio. Also, the excessive food may be export to other countries to increase the economy and GDP growth of a country.
The most obvious reason why GM foods is the only solution is that now barren land can be used to grow crops. Earlier the crops are only grown on fertile land but now farms have been created in barren lands to grow food. Take Egypt, for example, has constructed farms that are being used for growing different kinds of vegetables and fruits. Therefore, the waste land can be used for cultivating crops.
To conclude, by using modern techniques to modify food will not only solve the problem of hunger but also provide all types of food through out the year. As a result, the unemployment rate of a country will decline and will not only create jobs but also barren land can be used for cultivation. Therefore, I strongly agree that GM foods is the best solution for feeding people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82679738562 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47433966663 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7197175363 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132574370806 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504357337664 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577365207603 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785370137634 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383498946785 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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