The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
Online shopping have become increasingly popular nowadays. Many people argue that this trend will result in permanent closure of all shops in cities and towns. I totally agree with this statement, and this essay will discuss in detail why I believe there is a probability that the physical outlets will extinct one day.
The number of online consumers have increased consistently. This stable increase has been resulting in proportional decrease in the number of physical outlets as people find it more convenient to purchase products through the e-commerce. For example, digital apps like Amazon are so advanced that it has all major product brands across the world; which in turn gives its users millions of options to choose with just one click, unlike going to a physical store. Hence, as the number of online shoppers booms, the number of physical outlets will decrease. Apart from this, online shopping is much safer than going to a shop due to the risk of acquiring infectious disease. People have developed phobia towards going to the crowded areas or touching products displayed in the public as the outcome of the recent Corona virus outbreak across the world. Thus, people will prefer online shopping modes instead of going to the shops as they are aware of the detrimental effects that such infectious disease outbreaks can cause.
Conversely, there are people who disagree that the retail shops will be completely replaced by e-commerce. This is because there are products which people prefer to touch, feel and even try-out before purchasing. For example, while purchasing a perfume, a consumer would like to smell its scent in order to decide whether it suits their choice or not. Hence, although the number of online buyers will increase in the future, a few essential shops will remain open to the public.
In conclusion, many people opine that the increase in the trend of online shopping will lead to the disappearance of shops from the cities and the towns one day. I completely agree with this statement, not only because people find electronic shopping convenient, but also because people are aware that these physical stores are a major source of infectious disease outbreak.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
...In addition to this, online shopping is more safer than going to a shop due to the risk of...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, still, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17824773414 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5934651108 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516616314199 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7137995029 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292740526361 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119944919623 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10669952655 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203148889488 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707543889982 0.056905535591 124% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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