International air fares are falling and tourism is growing. What are advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity ?
Tourism plays an important role when it comes to increasing the countries income. Whilst some people are of the belief that tourism activities have their merits, others have a diverse view. In this essay, both advantages and disadvantages will be demonstrated before reach a conclusion.
To begin with, Tourism activity has an economic advantage. Nowadays, some nations depend on the funds which are come from tourist to make their improvements. In other words, not only these countries do not have any sources of incomes except Tourism's income but also some times this is the available solution. A prime example of that the Maldives which is the country depends on tourism by 100% for income because it has not another source for incomes. Hence, having given this example it is recommended that countries which have not diverse resources of incomes should make an improvement in tourism sectors to raise their funds.
Despite the idea mentioned-above, It is still assumed that increasing tourism activity has a negative effect on countries. As an illustration, It would have a detrimental impact on the cultural identity of those countries which have many Tourism types. For instance, In Egypt, when the governments open new places for Tourists, this changes some of values and traditions at Egypt such as in clothes and types of foods. Thus , It is suggested that Authorities should impose restrictions to control the numbers and types of tourism activity In order to save identical cultural.
In conclusion, the world has become a small village; tourism becomes a viable for all. However, increasing tourism activities still have their positives and negatives; Therefore, Authorities should make a balance between them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33090909091 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8291696305 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9134552793 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237362557011 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973399309573 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572093340765 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16845239952 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355700665857 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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