International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are your opinions on this?
Universal travelling and globetrotting had become popular than it was in the past. some argue that it has benefits, while others argue that they do not have any positive perks. I completely believe that international tourism will yield positive growth to states because it brings huge profits to the administrations which can be utilized to develop heritage as well as developing the whole tourist country for its needs. this essay will outline how foreign tourism would impact the trend.
Firstly, to begin with, when people visit places of attraction and plan tours on a regular basis, demand rises for that particular place. The Government comes into action if a place has increased visits and show interest in developing. The place will be secured and arranged tickets for entry. In this way, the funds are collected based on the demand a place has for the sightseers. For example, Taj Mahal was under no control until the year 1990 but, as the people who visit it are raised, tickets are arranged for its visiting. Now, Agra is a popular city with many facilities which were only gained by the famous monument.
Secondly, while tourists visit places sometimes human borne diseases spread among states by strangers who carry unknown parasites. Such diseases which are brought by others into the country will make a huge impact on the state crisis, it leads to unhealthy development which is not fair for the hostage country. For example, Ebola has spread in America by a carrier visitor who was already infected and treated but, it resulted in a lot of deaths in the USA.
To conclude, Although international tourism has some drawbacks these are overlooked by positive developments it brings. In my opinion, the negative trend is completely overwhelmed by positive trends in relation to international toursims.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for example, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67676421574 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9045386282 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170759563679 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598489055207 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065234585143 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121669858826 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940668766424 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.