It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both individual as well as society. Do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is the key aspect that impacts a person’s life drastically. It has been suggested, that an individual should get married before the age of 30 for their own good and betterment of the society. However, I disagree with the statement and this essay will discuss my opinion further in detail.
Firstly, people in their twenties should focus primarily on building their careers. Clearly, a college graduate is keen on finding a suitable job as he or she is filled with energy and enthusiasm to take up a job rather than opting for marriage at early stages of life. Following this, a person would be able to work hard without any familial interference. Consequently, he will be financially strong enough to support and nurture his family. Therefore, it is highly recommended to first concentrate on economical aspect of life.
Secondly, at this young age, men and women tend to lack enough maturity to handle relationships and struggles of family life. In addition, if couples are coerced to courtship in such circumstances, it may lead to unprecedented separations owing to their naïve nature. For instance, a recent study shows that in India where couples are married at young age, there is a 20% surge in divorce rates in past few years. Because of this, more and adults will be living alone, triggering a society filled with depressed and frustrated grown-ups.
Lastly, women in their twenties are encouraged to give birth to avoid potential health complications. However, the advancements in current medical sciences have made this reason invalid. Thus, engaging in early wedlock because of this reason seems illogical.
In conclusion, not only does settling down early affect the society, but it also has negative impact on individual and so, I am strongly against youngsters getting married before they turn thirty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98996655518 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73001083133 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635451505017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 299.0 20.2975951904 1473% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1492.0 106.682146367 1399% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 299.0 20.7667163134 1440% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 146.0 7.06120827912 2068% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201162723208 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201162723208 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111644867668 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584250265735 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 151.6 13.0946893788 1158% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -232.01 50.2224549098 -462% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 119.9 11.3001002004 1061% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.14 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.96 8.58950901804 267% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 121.6 10.1190380762 1202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 10.7795591182 1132% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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