In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your opinion.
There has been a drastic lifestyle changes among people over the few decades. Owing to this, there has been a surge in life expectancy around the globe in most of the nations. It has both upsides and downsides and in this essay I will discuss them. Overall, I think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
One obvious negative effect of this is the skyrocketing population. Undoubtedly, the increased number of senior citizens is troublesome for the government. The government is liable to provide pension, health insurance and various benefits to the elderly resulting in a schism in the funds which might have been used for the betterment of the future generations. For instance, in densely populated countries like India, the government often fails to provide basic healthcare and education due to overcrowding.
Another major disadvantage is reduced job opportunities. The older people need money and consequently have to do some work to pay off their bills. Hence, there is shortage of career opportunities for youngsters and thus creating a society of unemployed graduates.
On the plus side, there are two social merits that long life span can offer. First, for the elderly, as they can enjoy the company of loved ones for longer time which would help in building memories which could be cherished in future. Second, for the family members, who can benefit from the knowledge and wisdom of their old people; they can seek guidance throughout life aspects. For example, children often ask advice from their grandparents for importance life decisions.
In conclusion, weighing up both sides of argument, I would say that despite longevity have a few merits, its demerits are hard to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18115942029 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8489782675 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648550724638 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8304420745 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11715328829 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412820430118 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497686764574 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596036136453 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635716429925 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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