Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society. Others claim that violence in society is the result of more fundamental social problems such as unemployment.
How much do you think society is affected by violence in the media?
It is true to say that the criminal activities has increased in the recent years. Although, many people believe that such behavior is inspired from crime movies and TV shows, others opine that it is a consequence of unemployment. Both the arguments have validity, but I am in favor of the former view and in this essay I will explain my perspective in detail.
Undoubtedly, digital media are responsible for rampant violent activities. To begin with, there has been a surge in violent movies and reality shows depicting negativity, which consequently affects the mental thinking of individuals who are dedicated viewers of such shows. For instance, ratings of sitcoms like Big boss or Roadies, broadcasting nefarious behavior and abusive languages are at peak. Meanwhile, educational programs and other entertainment media are receiving less profit, forcing them to create a content which would bag them a viewership. As a result, more and more serials with violent content are released, resulting in a community filled with rage and anger.
On the other hand, it has been suggested that the reason behind this ruthlessness among people is due to unemployment. Certainly, an unhealthy work environment and job dissatisfaction would coerce an employee to leave the job and consequently this might influence a person to choose the wrong path. Whilst there is some truth in this assertion, but it is not a common scenario with everyone.
In conclusion, human beings are clearly influenced by what they see on screen rather than their own personal issues like unemployment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24110671937 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99374174736 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656126482213 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.612400306 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971461853953 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319888736969 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427641664782 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489574090316 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399107861273 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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