In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today around the world both the genders are working for bread and butter. It thus becomes imperative for men to share household chores with women. This essay will first discuss the problems faced by working women, followed by the reasons why men should share responsibilities at home.
To begin with, women today are no longer associated with household chorus only. They are demanding equal space both inside and outside the house. However, working women face many biases at both ends. While they fight against prejudices at work and face the glass ceiling, they often find themselves alone to look after home and kids. Consequently, many women either leave their job after kids or settle for trivial assignment at work often letting go promotions and transfers.
The stereotype of men associates with income and women as homemakers has been shattered now. It thus becomes imperative for men to share the burden of household chores. The act of sharing responsibility at home will also help set an example before children to set up a more inclusive society. Moreover, this would also help females to fight stress related to work. In addition to this, the sharing of responsibilities will help avoid marital disputes as more and more couples fight over sharing work at home.
In conclusion, I would say that couples who work to make a decent living should also share responsibilities at home. Let women be given the freedom to dream big and the power to chase her dream. We should shatter the role stereotype and help set a society with an egalitarian view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...set a society with an egalitarian view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, look, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97338403042 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63301876362 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8443226385 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248981098754 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095565683637 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792540238334 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16779832273 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784097199202 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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