Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
It is increasingly common for families to put their parents in care homes or nursing homes, rather than take care them at homes. This trend provides old people with advanced facilities at nursing homes, but there are drawbacks to be taken into account.
On the one hand, the main benefit of elderly people are being sent in nursing homes is that most of the care homes are well equipped and full of modern facilities that are much demanded or needed by senior citizens. In other words, vast majority of aged people suffer from mobility issues such as osteoarthritis or varicose veins. Exacerbation of these deterrents could be prevented by installing a elevator or a stair-lift, which could otherwise be unable to be protected at homes.
On the other hand, one problem when families put their older family members in care homes is that those geriatrics are not allowed to often meet their loved ones and suffer from loneliness. Care homes are most of the times surrounded with illnesses and death, so from this types of situations, geriatrics tend to be affected. As a result, curtailed happiness or sever depression could be experienced. This had not be the case, if families would have looked after them at their homes.
In conclusion, while living in nursing might be beneficial for elderly people, it can also lead the drawbacks of loneliness and it’s concomitant depression.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70342133607 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590517241379 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.258409587 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314771186556 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12449093794 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935418598843 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187156804694 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103421582439 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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