Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Many museums and historical areas have been boosted dramatically by tourists, whereas failing to attract resident ‘s attention . Some reasons have been suggested to put forward some feasible solutions to rise the amount of pp who live in the vicinity of locality .
There are some explanations for the reduction of local’s viewers . First , besises familarity with all of things ,the historical attractions seem to remain intact. As a result , it don’t raise their curiotity to spare time to pay a visit . Second , entrance fee is also attributed to the barriers preventing the rate of local visitors . They won’t waste money and timeless time just on the place they went before .
Some practical measures can be taken to stimulate more residentail people to come and visit .Schools should celebrate extracurricular activities at museums which is didactic as well as recreational competitions . Besides lowering fee,historical places should renovated ornate designs of the interor or hold some extra events for people to take part in .The increasing number of visitors and the native as a result of adopting mentioned actions .
In conclusion,museums and historical buildings should make change regularly to pick people’s curiosity . Becoming tourists trap can be achieved .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, second, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59183673469 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19700301497 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724489795918 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8781141089 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246706340806 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829768389615 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391589356878 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136341003559 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210647390722 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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