Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It's argued that individuals don't contribute to make a change to evironment but only the authorities and profit-oriented organisation . While I admit that goverment and businesses play a leading role in making a diffrence , I strongly object to the opinon as small movement can have a great impact .
On the one hand , competent authorities hold the power on protection . By laying down laws and stringent punishments , they can halt people to do harm to the surrounding . In addition , large companies are considered as the main contributors to upgrade our habitat . They can inspire pp to hold hand by producing environmentally friendly products and invest in advanced rubbish disposal .
On the other hand , individual effort have a big impact on a bigger picture . For example ,Household waste make up a large propotion of total waste discharged into the motherland . Therefore if everyone shoulder own task to categorize the types of rubbish , it just takes a few minutes to tackle while it will take a longer time for the waste management to solve . Moreover it will cut down expenditure and use the rest for another things . Therefore ,we must recognize the power of each person 's effort .
In conclusion , through aforementioned ideas , I believe that individuals contributor is as much vital as the support by gorvement bodies and company as well .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, another thing, for example, in addition, in conclusion, for another thing, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11872146119 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1164442761 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657534246575 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3467367871 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4166666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179289172782 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533959558709 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446547057826 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957254011052 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497356437338 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.