Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?
Large number of individuals think that worldwide tourism is harmful for their nation. There are various factors that contribute to this belief. To change this notion, at first reasons supporting these thought will be discussed and then possible solutions will be suggested.
First of all, older generation despise tourism industry since it brings foreigner to their homeland. Strangers have different cultures and even follow other religions than the natives. Thus, some conservatives argue that as more foreign tourists roam around the country, more young adults will get attracted to foreign customs and abandon practicing their own traditions. In addition, nationalists are concerned with security issues that may raise due to allowing international travelers into country's border. Although every country does some background checking prior to giving passage allowance, it has been proved not sufficient enough in so many occasions when a tourist turned out to be a spy.
Benefits of having a boosting tourism industry are so impressive that no one with a logical mind can overlook them. Therefore, government should take some initiative to change the way some people think about this industry. By emphasizing on the advantages of developing tourism industry, authorities can make people to understand that the benefits of this market outweigh its disadvantages. For example, by pointing out that, foreigners spend their money while traveling on food, souvenir, and hotels. As a result, they bring lots of income to their host country. Besides, international tourists can promote a nation’s traditions when they go back to their homeland or travel to other countries. Hence, there is no need to fear their influence on vanishing old rituals. As for security concerns, governments can make extra precautionary measures to single out malicious individuals from the ordinary ones.
In conclusion, although some people see international tourism as a thread to their country due several reasons, government can change that view via emphasizing on how beneficial it can be and ensuring the public safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54938271605 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91070165394 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645061728395 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1696532846 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.764705882 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297159765424 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824000783203 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491846863741 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183591264745 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573249492528 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.