Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities.
Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
It is often argued that free time is necessary to disappear the stress and recharge the body in reality. Some people might think that the number of people has long shifts in their workplace and is given a shortage of hours for doing hobbies. Although working long time pays back lots of money for individuals, this trend has more disadvantages. This essay will address the perspective of people’s life between work and leisure time.
First of all, the individuals’ health would be deteriorated. When people spend a lot of time on their work, they may have so much stress mentally and physically because they might have a lack of time to spend for the free time. For example, some extreme sports such as football are required to reduce the level of any stress because when they move their body dynamically, they may feel fairly energetic and refreshed through a plenty of sweat that they made. Thus, in order to protect the health, people would need to do some activities and decrease the work shifts.
Moreover, the social communications may be declined. In other words, the relationship of the family and friends might be worse because they cannot afford to enjoy the leisure time with them. For instance, when people do not take part in hanging out with their mates, the interaction with each other might decrease and then the happiness index might be also dropped due to the insufficient communications. Therefore, individuals might live their life unhappy and it would affect their social life as well.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that long time work brings high salaries, people need to be encouraged to have enough time for free. This issue may become the cause for people to live unsatisfied lifestyle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9180887372 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60942873742 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542662116041 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6851022672 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25669661984 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955022973664 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836636468868 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179778447845 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100872050822 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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