In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
The last few years, have witnessed a lot of building work in the country side, especially for houses. While some are of the view that the countryside needs to be protected the others feel there is no way out of this. In this essay we shall discuss why it is advantageous to move the new construction to the suburbs instead of within the cities.
The exponential surge in the population levels throughout the world has led to a need for more homes to be built in order to provide shelter to the people. The developed cities have already been so jammed and packed that there is no space available to accommodate more people there and the situation is bound to grow worse if we tried adjusting them. Traffic jams are a usual phenomenon for the city residents. For instance, recently a study was conducted by Time of India, which showed that on an average a working class individual spends about 48 hours per month stuck in traffic which is a sheer wastage of time that instead could have been employed on other productive activities.
Also, the fact that if this shift does not happen, the pollution levels will not take very long to breach the safety standards ultimately resulting in increased propagation of several non curable diseases can absolutely be ignored. Previous winters, Delhi witnessed the worst smog it had ever seen majorly because of increased air pollutants. People were forced to wear masks so as ensure they don't breathe in the toxins. There’s no doubt that if no corrective measures are taken and people don’t start inhabiting in neighbouring areas episodes of asthmatic and bronchial problems will soar.
As has been discussed in this essay, if we don’t commence setting up homes in the country side and restricted their development to the cities alone, the problems of congestion is bound to rise and the city inhabitants may develop diseases owing to higher pollution. Therefore, in my opinion, this shift is inevitable and we should accepted it before it gets too late.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he country side, especially for houses. While some are of the view that the countrysi...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... forced to wear masks so as ensure they dont breathe in the toxins. There's no ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89766081871 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6942330309 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1899539704 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.846153846 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137523907526 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043573026192 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343830410086 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742413992927 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453058586188 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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