Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
In recent years, the production techniques are shifting from handmade to machine made products. This essay will explain why I believe that the merits of handmade products outweigh the demerits in comparison to machine made.
Considering firstly the positives of handmade products, the cardinal one is that they are considered as invaluable possession. As these are skillfully crafted by artist who often make products that resemble their culture. In contrast, majority of the machine-made products are usually modern creation of arts which are available at multiple locations globally. Furthermore, the handmade goods are of premium quality. For example, the 'Khadi' shirt which is weaved out of cotton is a hand-woven and it is of top-notch quality. As a result, the life-span of such products are normally higher compared to machine-made.
However, the main disadvantages of handmade products are that they are often extortionately priced. This is because of the limited quantity of products that exist in the market place. For instance, the handmade paintings are exorbitantly priced in such a way that only people from affluent background can afford to buy. Although handmade commodities are expensive, in contrast, machine-made are cheaper. It is vital to remember that machine-made commodities are produced on large scale production while they pass on the price benefits to the final customer.
In conclusion, I think that the advantages of invaluable value and ultimate quality of handmade items outweigh the disadvantages of high pricing of the product compared to machine made which are cheaper.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re considered as invaluable possession. As these are skillfully crafted by artist ...
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Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
.... For example, the Khadi shirt which is weaved out of cotton is a hand-woven and it is...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02104136796 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552419354839 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6999971417 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0331183115774 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0135634755118 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188160574401 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.027129227676 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151042670839 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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