In most of the countries, people prefer to live in a rented apartment rather than buying a home. What
are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rented accommodation?
Home is a place where you love spending time and feel refreshed and relaxed after coming a long tiring day at work place. In majority of the nations, occupants are considering renting a house rather than buying one, as a result of inflation all over the globe.
I would like to discuss of pros and cons of selecting a rented accommodation for raising your family and kids. First of all, as due to jobs people do not have enough time to maintain their own house, so they choose rented one, as they need not to worry about the maintenance and fixing. In addition, people choose to live in societies where amenities are already provided for any issues happened in their apartment. Secondly, if you need to relocate due to work, than it will be really convenient to vacate the apartment as its not your own. In addition to these factors, buying a own house is really expensive and now days, people do not want to take such commitment and liability on their heads. As buying your own apartment involves taking home loan, therefore people tend not to get involved such process.
Along with ample benefits, there are few disadvantages as well of living in a rented accommodation, for instance there will be interference from you owner, which you might not like. Sometimes, land lords can be invading your privacy, which can be really annoying if you are a private person. Moreover, if think from assets perspective, rented apartment can never be your asset. However, if you buy your own home, it will be your asset and you can think it of as future investment. Adding to all these cons, one more thing is there, you are not allowed or restricted by your owner if you want to make any modifications to your home, whereas if that home is your own, you can do whatever you want and like.
To conclude, renting an home is a personal choice, but now days, this is the trend that instead of buying your own home, renting an apartment is easy and cheap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60632183908 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50716208863 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.146033175 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224607181884 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867902306617 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554256245877 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155737283908 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460862880644 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.