Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?
The problem of homeless people is common in almost all countries. Giving money to homeless people is the solution offered by a few of us. But, I believe in order to address this rising issue people and the government should join hands to tackle this problem.
To begin with, the government should open shelter homes for people who cannot own one. By this, these poor people will not have to spend nights in open and this is the least humane thing to do. Moreover, provide them with more job opportunities, so that they did not have to live a life in pity. Furthermore, in the case of elderly people who are abandoned by their wards should be given justice and their fair share of the property so that they can spend their remaining part of life with respect. Besides this, the pension for elderly people should be introduced so that they can find a place on rent.
In addition, people should also help the government by donating to agencies which maintain shelter homes. Secondly, nobody should leave their family elders for fending for themselves and if anybody does so, they should be socially boycotted. Lastly, all religions should open the doors of their religious places for people who are without a home, so that nobody sleeps without a roof.
In conclusion, the onus is on elected representatives and the normal population to provide shelter to homeless people. And everyone should take a pledge to do what is needed to be done to provide a roof to these poor hungry people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76153846154 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44586355317 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542307692308 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3463091115 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2307692308 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129217037697 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058021724184 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455654825405 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883853027134 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374195166849 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.