nowadays advances in technology and translation software people no longer need to learn new languages to communicate to what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement
In the modern world,the advent of computer software and technological advancement in language has changed the way people communicate with each other. Although it is argued that this change will make people intrusive to learn new languages, I disagree with this view because technology provides multiple options to understand languages but still certain professions need skills and efforts by professionals to understand language.
To begin with, there are a myriad numbers of software available in market which have made it easy for people to understand copious languages. To be more precise,contemporary software provides options to translate any unknown language into local language. Eventually,people become more dependent on such technological tools and avoid learning new communication skills. However,whether this development solve all problems of communication or not is a big question. The chief reason is understanding pronunciation and ancients still need knowledge about that particular language only.
Additionally,the writing and speaking of language is totally dependent on an individual because it requires special skill to be developed by people.Furthermore, in the world of globalization, everyday some new words are added in dictionary which may be not part of software until it is updated with latest version. Moreover there are certain professions in which on the spot translation is very important and for that using technological programs are not suggested. In this concern,it becomes compulsory for one to learn and understand new language. For example, the visa counselors and the lawyers need to respond on the spot without waiting for software to translate language.
In conclusion,while latest technology and updated software assist a lot to understand different language in shortest possible time,I do not believe that this innovation will create a situation where people would not need learning of any language because certain professions needs intervention of an individual to develop various skills to understand language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in short, speaking of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79934210526 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44003935418 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549342105263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.8725679461 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.916666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299669958467 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113860020361 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594568613791 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20129422527 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494556554134 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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