Nowadays children spend more time playing computer games than doing sports. Why is it happening?
Does it have a positive or negative affect on their development?
Children these days are more into computer parlor than in the field playing outdoor games. There are several reasons for such drastic transition of choices for unwinding. In my view, computer games are harming this generation in more than one ways.
According to me, young adults indulge themselves in playing computer games because of various reasons. Firstly, computers along with high bandwidth internet and easily available in their home or gaming-center, which gives them enough options to get involved in games. Secondly, computer games, are itself intriguing due to the visual effects, sound quality, making it more realistic. Moreover, most of the games offers: daily; weekly; or monthly competitions, which makes users to login on daily basis. Furthermore, games like PUBG or counter strike gives a platform to the gamers to build a team with their friends, which however makes it more interesting. Finally, they also offer the users to create a profile for rewards after every task achievements, which makes it more addictive.
Although some may argue that virtual games do help adolescents to develop, however, I strongly believe it has a more hazardous impact on them. This is because younger generation are notorious of being sleep deprived. For example, recent study in Canada shows a wide range of population is suffering from insomnia or sleeping amnesia, which are mostly teenagers. Further analysis shows several reasons for such disorders, gaming being one of them. As a result, the Government is taking major steps to educate pupils about the harmful effect of computer games.
To conclude, larger scope of availability of computers are encouraging youth to involve themselves in gaming but such options certainly have severe effect on their overall growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one way', 'a way', or simply 'ways'?
Suggestion: one way; a way; ways
...re harming this generation in more than one ways. According to me, young adults indul...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...is generation in more than one ways. According to me, young adults indulge themselves in pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3665480427 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64831336099 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644128113879 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6183315876 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212714524857 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706817149847 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583028693764 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132162702505 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397456588127 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.