Nowadays, culture is more or less the same around the world compared to in the past. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Culture is the primitive way of distinction among societies since human history. Culture is a set of human beliefs, traditions, language, variety of food, clothing and way of living which are forwarded from one generation to next. Despite this, it is agreed that during recent times, people are following almost same customs around the world which is impairing societies specifically in field of tourism and trade. This essay will discuss the impacts of identical culture on world in comparison to past.
Firstly, identical culture will highly impact tourism, people travel frequently to experience variety of culture and to witness the landmarks which is the beauty of world. A research paper published in March 2018 in Herald, world's renowned magazine of tourism concludes that international tourism is facing downfall since 2016 because ancestor's culture traditions and customs are fading by the time. Thus, it is clear that people nowadays are not following their culture instead practising which ease them. Consequently, tourism for the purpose of cultural understanding is declining. This means that economies of the country that are entirely depend on tourism will face serious consequences in near foreseeable future.
Secondly, culture not only promotes tourism but also bolster the trade of the country. For example, Rali, Ajarak, Chundri and Batik are the traditional clothes of Pakistan which are famous through out the world and every year 30% of export are comprises of this stuff but according to financial statics published in June 2018, these figures dropped to 10%. Upon detailed discussion with local manufactures it was conveyed that these cultural products are no more in demand across the world because now a days people usually prefer casual dress such as jeans and shirt for their ease. This sharp decrease in figures evaluates that trade will be affected due to identical culture.
To conclude, cultural diversity is one of the joys this world has to offer. Though by the time these diversities are vanishing which is negatively influencing tourism and trade industry across the globe. It is predicted that if this issue is not addressed timely the culture of societies will demolished in near foreseeable future.
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'demolish'
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...ed timely the culture of societies will demolished in near foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34366197183 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66450285814 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566197183099 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9072363976 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5625 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223656799937 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797352956601 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523696175437 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144579057566 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355253965432 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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