Nowadays media should include more good news in their publications. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Media plays a vital role in spreading information worldwide. However, It is argued that mass media, such as newspapers, the internet and news channels should publish plenty of pleasant news. I am in complete discord with this statement and believe that the primary focus should be on broadcasting uncertain events because of the importance of these events and influence on a wide audience.
There would be a lack of awareness of real facts if public announcements include only favourable information. With regard to general awareness, it is important that a common man should be aware of other unpleasant events, such as current crime rate, war situation and occurrence of any natural disaster across the globe. In the absence of such news, people would be unable to take any precautionary measures and most likely face safety issues. For instance, the recurrent terrorist attacks are more frequent on border areas of certain countries and excluding the coverage of such critical activities may put tourists in trouble while their visit to nearby areas.
Another reason for publishing unusual news is its dominance over headlines. This means that rare facts are more compelling than regular ones. Moreover, it is psychologically proven that 80% of the readers are more enticed to read odd news as compared to ordinary headlines. Therefore, to seek public attention on political matters, such as corruption, it is important to highlight such issues through media. Income tax raid on political leaders' properties is a prime example when media exposes corrupted leaders in front of the whole nation.
In conclusion, even though there is an argument of covering up more prosperous news by media, I am in favour of highlighting the more unpleasant stories because of the aforementioned reasons for public awareness and recognition.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31849315068 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90738701081 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633561643836 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4150557373 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194252599299 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617850641516 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025674320104 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112757598946 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00924314776386 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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