Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs.
What problems this causes?
What are solutions?
Currently, the number of elderly people who are seeking similar jobs as youth is on the rise. This new rush for same careers influences the job market in so many ways. In this essay both issues and possible solutions will be discussed.
Increasing interest to apply for occupations among older generation can cause detrimental effect on society. Firstly, if people who have hit the retirement age refuse to go home and insist on being an active job seeker, less number of youths get the opportunity to be recruited since they cannot compete with their senior fellows in terms of experience. Therefore, younger generation would be forced to take on unrelated jobs to their field of study and thus the industry will suffer from lack of innovation and motivation which a young adult could have offered. Secondly, as people get older, they need to rest more and be taken care of. In contrast, staying in an office endanger their health. Moreover, they should be able to enjoy their retirement time by traveling around the world or spending quality time with their grandchildren.
There are some steps that can be taken to alleviate the situation. To tackle the problem, government can set a mandatory retirement age and enforce companies to follow this law by punishing those which fail to do so. Although this solution will work, it might be best to find out the reason why older people prefer to stay on their work, i.e., what motivates them to make such decision. For example, some retired individuals complain that their pension does not cover their expenses thus they have to be an active employee to support their family. Hence, government can remedy this problem by increasing the minimum amount of wage. Furthermore, authorities can encourage companies to hire youngster through various means such as decreasing the taxes for those organizations which have younger staffs.
In conclusion, older generation should leave the working environment when they reach a certain age otherwise they make lots of troubles not only for young adults who are struggling to enter the working community but themselves by endangering their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10511363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64143901887 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607954545455 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6759710236 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212759316765 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06727755866 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540029946477 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120122665132 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398975659598 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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