Nowadays, most children prefer to spend several hours playing with electronic devices over doing more traditional leisure activities.
What problem does this cause?
What do you think are possible solutions?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words
The popularity of online games is rampant among youngsters today. Over the past few years, it is evident that the playstations and video games succeded in replacing the fun outdoor activities. This essay will discuss the problem in detail and put forward several solutions to this issue.
The physical as well as social capabilities of young minds devoting hours luring at digital screens are at stake. Usually, playing such games are always accompanied by munching fastfoods which contributes to a major health problem like obesity at an early age. Also, gazing at an electronic gadget for long duration can cause vision impairment in some juvenilles. In addition, the addiction of playstations renders them to make actual friends which in turn will affect their socializing skills in future. A recent research by the State Psycology Department shows that people are becoming more and more depressed due to lack of human companionship.
Various measures shall be taken to overcome this matter. Collaborative efforts of schools and parents are mandatory. Educational institutes must make sports activities compulsory for their students and encourage them to participate by awarding scholarships and rewards. While parents should keep a watch on the time their little ones pay on mobiles and computers. Moreover, a habit of reading or interest in a particular hobby should be developed in a child at a young age. Thus, indulging them in other leisure activities, will keep them away from electronics.
All in all, it is evident that choosing entertainment via electronic devices instead of doing traditional leisure activities is malicious to children. Emphasis on less use of gadgets and more involvement in other activities must be given.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34545454545 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93287098786 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5871191113 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151438025961 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403862227902 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491779621303 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917691522084 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506916489184 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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