Nowadays,not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?
SInce history, science subject is considered as topper's choices. Most of the parents wanted their children to study science and become a professional and serve the society. However, today, only fewer number of students choose science subjects in university, which is really an alarming message. this essay will examine the reasons for this issue and discuss the harmful effects on the society.
Let us discuss the major causes for this problem. One of the prime reason is that science subject is definitely toughest, also it requires more study time, hard work and efforts than any other course. Mostly students, love to follow subjects which could offer better job scopes with little study work. another significant reason for the reduction of students for science subject is that it is also an expensive subject to study. As compared to management and engineering courses, students have to spend five years in college and pay huge fees. Moreover, the internship for science students is also not easily available because of the risk factor associated with the lives of patients.
There would be really harmful affect of this trend in the future society. As, the number of science pupils reduces, it signifies the shortage of medical staff in the future whether it is pharmacist, nurses or doctors. this further would effect the quality of medical services provided to the patients or sufferers. another remarkable impact of this trend would be that the medical facilities would be really expensive as the ratio of doctors and patients will truly be improportional.
To conclude, science subject is considered very tough and generally opted by genius students only. The reasons such as hard-subject, high fee structure pushes students to avoid studying science in university level. If this trend continues, it would have terrible impact on the society including poor medical services at higher charges and shortage of medical personnel. Therefore, students should be encouraged to take science subject for the betterment of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3024691358 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61003100563 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0833209215 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290464537538 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966516380691 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621048095922 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183462419759 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706256499345 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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