Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people, who lost their jobs because of it.
It is true that online shopping has become a norm in the society these days; however, there is a controversial debate regarding the long-term consequences of this trend on the environment and unemployed people, who lost their jobs due to this widespread phenomenon. This essay will discuss possible impacts on both the environment and people.
Online shopping has adverse effects on the environment by changing the pattern of behaviors among consumers. In fact, online shopping makes purchases more convenient, which indirectly leads to consumerism with people over purchase unnecessary products. Before, individuals were restricted to purchase from local stores, which were mostly provided limited products; however, by the advent of the technology and emerge of prestigious websites such as Amazon or Alibaba, there are countless choices available for costumers in even inaccessible locations. The availability and convenience as well as different marketing schemes on these websites, such as purchasing in bulk, fast delivery or fake discount, have encouraged people to buy unnecessary products. After all, the environment must absorb mounting wastes produced by the new consumer culture.
This trend also has a negative effect on local businesses. Firstly, local shops must close their shops since they could not compete with online shops which offer wide range of products at a better price. Therefore, not only local business owners would lose their investment in their establishment, but also workers would lose their job, leading to an increase in the unemployment rate in those locations. Secondly, these shops were a place that local business, such as farmers or artists, could sell their products. Closing these shops would lead to devastating effects on local businesses, and force unemployed people to relocate from small towns to big cities in search of jobs.
Overall, the long-term effects of online shopping are negative both on the environment, by encouraging people to buy more products, and on people, especially on local business which lose their customers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, after all, in fact, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5329153605 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87554296769 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6743906329 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.769230769 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262247762289 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937152875518 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625278544631 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163631528653 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563536824667 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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