Nowadays people are less fit and healthy than they were in the past which could affect their long-term health. why do you think this is? what can be done to solve this problem?
In the contemporary era, people are usually physically unfit and unhealthy compared to earlier times, which would have detrimental effects on their health. People may not maintain their health because less physical work in modern times or intake of ineffective healthy diet. Nevertheless, these problems can be solved with a change in their lifestyle and adopt a healthy diet in their daily routine.
To begin with, nowadays, most people prefer to do sedentary work or less physically challenging tasks, whereas in the past, people had to do more laborious work. Since technology has been advancing in the last few decades, labour intensive work has become so easy that it makes an individual lethargic and prone to the diseases. For example, people in the digital age prefer to go by car for short distances rather than go by foot, by which a person can burn his calories and stay healthy. Secondly, the consumption of unhealthy diet which makes the body weak and triggers many diseases such as diabetes, heart strokes and obesity. However, in early times, people used to take rich nutrient food that could make them physically and mentally fit.
Although there are health issues these days, these can be solved with the collective efforts of people and the government. Firstly, there is a need to alter the sedentary lifestyle and people should adopt a healthy lifestyle by giving adequate time to physical exercises. In addition, the government should promote physical fitness by reducing taxes on exercise equipment and sports products. As a result, people would be encouraged to play games and apply for gymnasium subscriptions. Lastly, the government should impose heavy taxes on junk food chains which would discourage people from eating unhealthy food. For instance, some governments have started healthy food programs for their citizens and raised the duty on sugary and fast food brands for the promotion of healthy life among people.
To sum up, the modern world has more health issues due to their sedentary lifestyle and lack of nutritious diet in their daily schedule. While, it could be solved with government strict text policy on unhealthy food providers and people make a habit of exercise or play sports in a routine.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14207650273 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58730330147 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551912568306 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0539448902 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.625 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227860303881 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775781517547 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468807174512 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148844121652 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042373157531 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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