Parents should control the amount of time their children spend on the internet.
Nowadays, children can reach the internet through many ways, and then they spend a long time on it. This essay will agree that parents should manage the time that their children spend on the internet, because spending excessive time on the internet could be wasteful and it is unhealthy for children’s physiology and mentality.
First of all, children waste time on the internet and then they do not have enough time to study. Children have to finish their homework before they play games on the internet. In addition, children should spend more time to explore the outside world and make friends in the real world. For example, teens and children joined sport clubs or social groups in the extracurricular time before the internet became common. However, now they spend more time on social online games. Therefore, parents should limit the time that children can use the internet and encourage children to play outside.
Secondly, stuffing in the internet is unhealthy for children’s body and mentality. Children access the internet by any/ a technology product which has a screen. It is harmful for children’s eyes if they watch the screen for a long time. There are many young children, who often used products with a screen, and as a result are wearing glasses in the 21st century. Moreover, children have become to relay on the internet. They want to be heard and seen on a social media. For example, they spend more time posting on the Facebook, because they want to attract people and give them ‘likes’. If they do not achieve their expectation , they feel disappointed.
In conclusion, parents should spend time to discuss this issue with children and manage the time use the internet. This is because it will cause many negative results if children spend too much time on the internet. To control the amount of time will help children experience a natural childhood and benefit in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03426791277 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70483879856 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482866043614 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3985249383 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0526315789 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.543582808501 0.244688304435 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187393985907 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121539377546 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.402048266751 0.151304729494 266% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123597629437 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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