In the past, many people had skills such as making their own cloths and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like those are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? How far is this situation in your country?
In old time, people had so many abilities and skills that were useful in day to day to life. But nowadays, people are lacking in skill like knitting, weaving, sewing and repairing or maintenance of household thing which people in past had as a result these skill are disappearing. There are plenty of reasons behind this trend which this essay will discuss further and also shed light on the current scenario in my country.
There are numerous reason behind the why people are forgetting these skills. To commence with, it is the era of industrialization and technology which provided us a number of ways to get things done in much convenient and cheaper way. Since machines gives us product which is more consistent and superior with much less labour and price compared to traditional method. Moreover, people are living in fast paced world and busy life schedule which encourage them to buy readily available product in market rather than learning those skills which is quite cumbersome process and takes away much needed time which they can spent in something productive. Furthermore, most women were playing role of housewife which enables them to have enough time to learn and practice these skills as their time pass activity. Beside this, today most of house equipment are digital rather than mechanical which contain electronic circuit and sensor which can not repaired without normal tools and professional skills. So that is why people prefer to take them to repair shop.
In india also, traditional skill are disappearing gradually as new advancement spreading its root all over the place. But still there are places in india where old methods of work still exist. Most of people in india assume traditional methods are obsolete. Old skills only became a part of museum to showcase.
In Conclusion, traditional skills are vanishing due to fast spread of technology and modernization equipped people with much convenient, cheaper and time-efficient methods which are useful in current era
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day to'.
Suggestion: day to
...bilities and skills that were useful in day to day to life. But nowadays, people are lacking ...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this skill' or 'these skills'?
Suggestion: this skill; these skills
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Message: Did you mean 'why'?
Suggestion: why
...ry. There are numerous reason behind the why people are forgetting these skills. To ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...es away much needed time which they can spent in something productive. Furthermore, m...
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Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... where old methods of work still exist. Most of people in india assume traditional methods are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14067278287 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66387363199 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.065539102 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.066666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184363900158 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663272163059 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637493769212 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119104523953 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927894542803 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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