Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas.
Why do you think that is?
What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
Crime is is one of common problem which world is facing these day. However it is seen that incidents of crime is are more that compared to rural areas. This essay will discuss why this is the cause and appropriate solutions that can alleviate this problem.
There are many reason of higher crime rates in cities than in villages. People living in cities have more stress level as compared to village dwellers. Because people in villages are more close to nature and use less technological gadget which increases frustration and dissatisfaction. So they lead more calm, positive attitude and satisfied life. In cities rich poor disparity is also one of the major cause of crime. Although there are many opportunity of employment in cities but still there are many people who are jobless or earn very less. By seeing lifestyle of effluent people they also aspire to live that life of luxury and status. Specially youth in cities very impulsive and impatient they want overnight success, power and fame Consequently, they sometimes they become so desperate about being successful they do not hesitate to adopt unethical means to become rich like burglary or even murder. Beside, consumption of drugs and alcoholic beverages is on higher side in metro cities which make people senseless and aggressive. They could not judge what is wrong and what is right in intoxication which result in ill mannered behavior.
However there are some steps that can reduce crime rates. Government should introduce strict laws for criminal that set an example that would act as deterrent to people. There is also need to increase control on substance abuse. Non-governmental organizations and the government should go hand in hand and conduct awareness programs among youth. Moreover, schools and families in cities should be conducive to the moral upbringing of youngsters. Hence, we can avoid them go astray and curtail a major cause for the growth of crime.
Concisely, controlling the population in cities by providing better employment opportunities in villages and regulating substance addiction will assist us in bringing down the crime in urban areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18390804598 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72882617092 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58908045977 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.216460661 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185129457966 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568222294042 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719334710009 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107794476202 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208547773828 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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