Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
Nowadays sports is gaining popularity around the globe. it is also being used as an important medium to ease tensions between enemy nations and bring out patriotic emotions in a safer way from both the sides. In the below paragraphs I will share my experience and elucidate to justify this statement.
As we are moving towards an era of globalization international events like the football world cup and cricket are gaining immense popularity. These events give countries opportunities to showcase not only their talent but also have recently become an ideal platform to ease international tensions whereby friendly matches of football or cricket are being used as a catalyst when many diplomatic measures fail to break the ice. As these international events especially football world cup have global coverage and the wider impact on the audience.
In the recent past, football and cricket matches between India and Pakistan have helped to avoided military confrontation and bring peace several times. On the other hand, similar examples can be taken into account where international sports events have helped arch enemies like South Korea and North Korea to improve diplomatic relationships and opened a channel for dialogue.
Since these sports competitions have huge following globally and it gives public on both the sides an opportunity to showcase their patriotic feelings and vent their anger on social media platforms like Twitter, Facebook which is considered much safer.
Hence considering the above facts and examples it is evident that sports have become an important means in bringing peace and bettering relationships between the countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44401544402 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79731794786 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7870931668 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211343654746 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872584195104 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560267128206 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101328306539 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663912667435 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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