Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree
Over the decades, a different form of the disease, and its treatment have always remained disputable among certain demographics of society. Some people believe that researching preventive measures is better than the amount of effort and capital required for treating a disease. This essay will discuss the reason why I completely agree with the investment in disease protective processes.
On the one hand, people believe that taking modern health treatment is too expensive to afford them. They are justifiably worried about those costs which force them to sell their entire asset to treat the disease. Due to the lack of affordable health sources, all low to high income are bound to approach the costly treatments. Sometimes these expenses don’t even allow them to reach out to hospitals and certainly loss of life. A research study shows that about 60 percent in Bangladesh are losing their life because of expensive medication such as Lung cancer, heart attack, and much more. These few instances have forced people of mid to low society to remain helpless in the form of treatments.
Moreover, preventive measures should be introduced in every type of disease. Extreme diseases such as lung, breast, brain, and liver cancer as well as heart-related issues need to be treated by providing proper guidance, training, exercise, and diet plans. These are more cost-effective and essential in one’s life. Research conducted in Pakistan proves that out of 100, 80 people are keen to cure either naturally through home remedy or excessive running. This proved that the Government should start taking initiative to invest in preventive method and also creating awareness among all group of people
To conclude, I profoundly believe that the benefits of bringing new preventive measures are more compelling than spending on costly treatments. Not only is the advantage of this investment is helpful for all society of people but also contributing to a healthy environment.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30158730159 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7488360761 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.891923349 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22863586623 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671885634795 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725813515686 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141368077853 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596131736751 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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