Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a meaning shared by some scientists that our genes are most important in personality’s forming and development. They’ve recently conducted a few observations that our experience doesn’t influence our personal views. I can’t totally agree with this statement, as I have enough proof from the real life that refutes exaggerated importance of people’ characteristics.
Few months ago, I watched TV program about Chinese orphan children. Most of them have unknown origin, they don’t know their parents, but young charges have a special education. Children started to study mature subjects in very young age. As a result, students in their teens able to think like an adult and take mature decisions. There are characteristics we are born with completely irrelevant.
Ukrainian psychologists consider that people’s experience and ability to travel influence their nature. It is very important for every one of us to learn about new countries, folks, their customs and list goes on and on. People ought to feel their own independence by travelling a lot. To give a clear example, famous people who spend most of their lives in aircrafts have an opposite view from common people who are always busy sitting in offices.
However, there is a small influence of our nature genes. From my own experience, I have some friends who choose a similar specialty with their parents. There is also possibility of coincidence, but I think genes could influence people differently.
In conclusion, I want to say that self-development is very important part of our life. There is no reason to be lackadaisical and avoid changes. Successful people should always broad their horizons to feel themselves better and have happier life than others. So our way of life indisputably have major influence.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239884393064 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.14450867052 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112716763006 0.0946595960268 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0404624277457 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0809248554913 0.0437548338989 185% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.104046242775 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0115606936416 0.0403226058552 29% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.17472590134 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0260115606936 0.0326793684256 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0462427745665 0.0861772015684 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0115606936416 0.021408717616 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0115606936416 0.011925033212 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1829.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35069444444 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371527777778 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.288194444444 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215277777778 0.203846283523 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.166666666667 0.137316102897 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17472590134 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 71.0255042476 60.7387585426 117% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1578947368 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0118572215 49.517814964 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2631578947 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.814263465372 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 43.9773391813 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.33695652174 1.69124875643 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317422687059 0.332605444948 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0621936454421 0.102741220458 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0552193732693 0.0668466124924 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.483297733719 0.534860350844 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0989025533302 0.148594505496 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103185122303 0.134430193775 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567633755599 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.185733026827 0.324371583561 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0255512701653 0.0638462369009 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182131040589 0.228012699653 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580782087575 0.058150111329 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.