Should parents allow their children to play similar TV programmes and computer games as their friends do
The question of letting children watch television shows and games similar to their friends is quite important in the present society. In my view, I would support the argument of not giving permission to children to do same as their friends because sometimes the values of both families are different and there ought to be check and balance on the activities of their children.
There are a great number of reasons to restrict children from copying their friends in regards to Tv and games. The most compelling one is that as the children of young age are minor and there are certain games and even television shows which includes violent content. This type of media and entertainment would provoke violence among children. In other words, children with such experiences are more likely to develope less tolerance which as a result built violent behavior. It is often reported that shooting games are mostly played opposite friends in a competition which creates a liking for even those who do not play it, as peer pressure from their classmates.
Another strong argument to consider is that every family has its own values to follow. It is a possibility that certain content is allowed to be watched at a friends home but it is not appropriate in one's house. For example, it is commonly observed that children are not allowed to watch age restricted content but there are certain families who allow their children to watch such shows as to promote confidence and knowledge. Resultantly, children should be monitored all the time to keep them attached to the values and should not be allowed to blindly watch and play anything because of their friends.
Given this argument, it is reasonable to conclude that allowing children to do the same activities as their friends would violate their norms and values and also to put them at a risk of learning violence and intolerance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...iends home but it is not appropriate in ones house. For example, it is commonly obse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for example, as a result, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92452830189 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6061879245 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496855345912 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8282419793 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413309137113 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149639265804 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924722621205 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261646395927 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384212606938 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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