Some Governments say how many children a family can have in their country should be strictly controlled. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. Is It sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way?
Some governments believe that the population growth should be strictly controlled. They might control childbirth by restricting the number of children an individual family can bear through the implementation of levy. In my opinion, I strongly agree that it is the correct decision to be taken by authorities as it contributes towards a healthier and progressive society.
Firstly, restricting childbirth to control population will help authorities to reducethe mortality rate and offer better health facilities to its citizens especially to the mothers as they might go through several during the pregnancy and labor. Consequently, this will help mothers to offer proper care and attention to their families which will eventually lead to a healthier society. At present, Chinese authorities have banned its citizens from having more than two children, therefore, the mortality rates in China is considerably low because of the implementation of this policy.
Another point to consider is that the enforcement of taxes on childbirth will help countries to generate revenue which can be invested to maintain a standard of health care facilities as well as in provisioning of funds for research in the field of medicine. As a result, countries will be able to develop vaccines and medicines for fatal diseases which might be exported around the globe, helping the humanity as a whole. The Srilankan government has generated a large proportion of revenue by putting up birth control regulations utilizing it in health sector, hence, it is a well-established fact that their health system is now considered one of the best in the world.
In conclusion, limiting the birth of children by authorities via imposition of taxes in will serve as a benchmark not only for the economic but also for the well-being of the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3275862069 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11011544379 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555172413793 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6190442978 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.5 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268976571439 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111898667948 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868999603427 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166409005731 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927835213186 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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