Some older people struggle with the use of modern electronic technology such as smartphones and computers. What are the causes and propose a solution.
For sometime now, it has become a topic of discussion, whereas the elderly have to suffer using new generation electronic gadgets like smartphones and computers. This is because it is complicated for them since they are not aware to handle such phones, and the solution to this is giving assistance to operate the same.
With the age is learning ability also becomes slow, however, these high-tech phones and computers are with different features like video calls, email assesses and many more which becomes a bit more challenging for any old person to understand at one go additional they take time to understand than others. Since their generation has been simple and no fancy technology was there it has becomes a task for them. For instance, according to a survey conducted by the Apple Company, they say 89% of younger people prefer the advanced phones or computers because an elderly preference more towards something simple and easier to use than newly featured electronics.
To curb the problem there is a simple solution to it, which is offering assistance to use these electronics. Firstly, a step by step guide is necessary to teach them one application or features at the time is more important rather than showing everything at one time that’s how they can become a pro. Secondly, there should be a booklet to refer back if they get stuck it will help them to understand the next step and solve the problem by themselves. For example, Some states, like New Jersey in the USA offer classes to older people using modern gadgets so that they can be a part of the advanced generation.
To conclude, high tech electronics are difficult to handle by aging people since it has some complicated usage, but it can be solved by offering them guidance and taking one step at a time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85667752443 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64331394589 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550488599349 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1398314411 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.1 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160103109947 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648616907183 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441328332576 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964779772034 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107926360695 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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