Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some parents would argue that the best services for children of pre-school age is at childcare centres, others would argue that their children is better taken care by their grandparents. Although family members love their kids more and can teach them their own languages, I believe children should be sent to childcare centres to learn how to live independently.
On one hand, grandparents will be better carers for their children because they love their kids more than anyone else and they can also teach their grandchildren how to speak their own languages. That is to say that children, who are born in a foreign country, can have a chance to know more than one language if they are taken care by their grandparents or any family members. For example, in 2018, a survey conducted by a Vietnamese newspaper in Toronto showed that 80% of Vietnamese children, who was stayed at home with their grandparents at their pre-school age, can speak both English and Vietnamese fluently. However, I believe that this is not a long-term affect because they tend to forget their own language when they grow up.
On the other hand, childcare centres can help children grow up independently. At those centres, one teacher usually has to take care at least three children; hence, they do not have enough time to take care any kid specially. Children have to learn how to deal with their basic needs such as taking shower, having lunch or going to sleep. For instance, a survey of Childcare department of Toronto University in 2017 showed that more than 90% of children, who was sent to pre-school centres, could go to kindergarten at age 4 without any difficulty, while only 50% of children, who stayed at home with their families, can do that. Therefore, I believe childcare centres is the best place for children of pre-school age because they can learn basic skills before they start their schools.
In conclusion, while some parents would let their children stay at home with family members because they would have the best care and learn another language, I believe parents should send their children to childcare centres to learn how to grow up independently before they start their schools.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91913746631 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6217562768 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43935309973 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0420868561 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.083333333 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9166666667 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290467381924 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131820380379 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823571797347 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220427767407 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627310779397 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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