Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
It is believed by some that university degree is only important to those who wants to get a good job with good salary structure, whereas other thinks that, it adds a greater value to the society as well as for a person to have a graduate degree . In this essay, I will discuss both the points and will state my opinion.
Primary education has become a necessity in an individual's life. In todays generation, however primary education is not sufficient to survive in this competitive world. One must possess a university degree to compete in the market for better jobs. Having done a speciality course, will definately add benefits to one's resume. A research at oxford university studied that, people having a university degree will be benefitted with better job profile, that those who do not hold one.
On the other hand having a job satisfaction is of greater importance. A person can be very productive, if that person has a favourable working environment. For example, if an employee, is having a great tendency to lead a team, but due to lack of his educational qualification, he is given a lower post, he wont be able to contribute that well and would always be seen as underperformed. This problem can be solved, if a person holds a graduate degree making him to be qualiied as a team leader.
Having a specialization in a specific field can prove to be of great importance, to self as well as to the society. Certain contribution like, in the field of medicine, can only be achieved by having a university degree. A doctor can only operate on people, if he has a medical degree from the university and with that he can contribute to the well being of society. So an additional degree can help in contributing ones work towards the community.
In my opinion, university degree is a must, if a person wants to do something useful for the society, as well as for self. Also, a degree brings a respect to an individual in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, as for, as to, for example, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69186046512 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90535433397 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497093023256 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8318478974 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9411764706 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215119697784 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718139516645 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547298469615 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133879398703 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653988743828 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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