Some people believe that all the company decisions should be taken by the managers whereas others think it is better to include employees while making decisions. Discuss both the points and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether to involve the organizations' staff with the management in every decision-making process. In my opinion, important company decisions should be taken by only managers.
The idea of staff involvement in every company decisions is advocated by people because it improves the employee and employer relationship, and projects different angles on the decision table. With regards to the former, when the workers of an enterprise are asked to share their opinions and ideas before launching any new company policy, they feel valued and consider themselves as a significant contributor to the team. As a result, they raise their level of efforts and stay committed to the organization. It is also believed that when more minds are involved in decision-making, more ideas are brought into the light, which would otherwise have been overlooked.
However, the above arguments can be rejected by considering the sense of individuality and confidentiality involved when employees are also a part of the crucial decisions taken by the managers. As far as individual opinions are concerned, the company associates are most likely to support the ideas for an individual benefit. However, the management has to be unbiased and set the policies which are for the benefit of the overall organization. In additions to this, it is also difficult for the leaders to reach at any conclusion when there are tons of individual opinions. At the same time, there are some situations when confidential documents are taken under consideration while making decisions and disclosure of such confidential information to employees is not a feasible option for the management. Therefore, security could be an issue when employees are also involved in important decisions.
In conclusion, even though the inclusion of workforce paves the way to a stronger employee and employer relationship but I believe that certain important decisions demand confidentiality and are better taken by the management.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and are better taken by the management.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, as for, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44871794872 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19670045826 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535256410256 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7179793158 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244812508066 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905411354556 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641240405573 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160521786195 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565772151451 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.