Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
In today’s world, technology is going very fast and people for continuing must be up to date, parents are worried a lot about their children from childhood and try to learn them to be experienced and modern to meet their needs in the future. Also professionalism makes them achieve high self-confidence to handle their job and be the best in their job position.
I am totally opposed to say that children recreation time must be educational based on the following reasons.
To start with considering, playing in a group causes children get experienced in variety of skills covering communication with different persons in a group, cooperation with their friends, working in a team to achieve a specific goal, being punctual, respecting to other’s sights, being independent from their parents in facing a problem and challenge with difficulties. Also taking responsibility that is very crucial for their life hereafter.
There is a negative aspect of insisting children to be involved in learning all the time even in leisure time. That is they certainly get tired and will despair. So they do not want to follow training and they call a halt to study within their way and lose their motivation to come up with. Thus, parents encounter with destructive effects. In some cases has been viewed children have never come back to educational track and completely have changed their trend to their way.
According to the above analyses, we find out children will be able to access influential experiences and skills consciously or unconsciously. Attaining these abilities just within playing in a group are not ignored. As you are aware, they have shining outcomes in making their future and their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, in some cases, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14642857143 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95629516836 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.0464990572 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156809536406 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575947135127 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435135259061 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937863701747 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254435094246 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.