Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
The pattern in which pupils pass their free times varies greatly from one to another. It is argued that at present time children's leisure activities should be involved with education. However , i believe that through doing some other activities like watching television, doing physical exercise and playing sports with peers in spare times may keep their mental state always fit.
To begin with, young children need sufficient physical movement for enhancing their mental ability. This can be better illustrated by the school timetable, which always contains dedicated schedules for sports activity and it is true for almost all the institutions. For this reason pupils are bound to participate these activities which ultimately improves their fitness level. Additionally, continuous involvement with study may create some concentration related problems. For instance, if they are given any problem regarding academia at off hour, it might be panicking for them. As a result they may become resistant to it and their output can be declined. Instead, if he utilizes this period of time in watching television or sporting , it may provides relaxation and mental calmness.
On one hand, there are some effective benefits of engaging children with activities related to study in their free times. Firstly, these can increase knowledge of the student. It has been proved that pupil who read newspaper or books from different other genres become able to acquire knowledge easily. They also become successful in getting admission for tertiary education or managing a better job. Because both of the above are now a days very competitive and only academic qualifications are judged in the entrance exams.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that co-curricular activities of the pupil in pastimes are significant as these foster their brain activity. So parents should ensure their kids have sufficient scope of interacting with other pupils by gossiping, playing games regularly and watching several entertaining programs on television.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50159744409 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.811056886 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619808306709 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2574416655 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.294117647 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173263997904 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563540653963 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417676158038 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10356204842 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566823858551 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.