Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that art plays a fundamental role in expressing an artist's thoughts and beliefs to society. People opine that there should be more budget allocation for artwork development in a society; to some extent, it is deniable. There are other important factors as well, which needs to be taken care of for the betterment of society.
The statues, paintings, and other arts symbolize society. Often, the sculptures are built to remember the history of the place or to remember the personnel's dedication to society's upbringing. For example, all across Maharashtra, there are many Chhatrapati Shivaji Maharaj statue being placed, potraying the immense character, the qualities are praised worldwide. Moreover, Mother Teressa statue shows the down to earth character; how she sacrificed her life for the poor's well-being. These recognizable structure helps to remember the contribution of the great leaders for our society.
Furthermore, the paintings give a message to the mass population. The paintings at the town's junctions and cities get much attention from the crowd passing by. In 2014, the Prime Minister of Inda announced, "Swachha Bharat Abhiyan, " which is a clean India campaign. Many posters and graffiti were made across various parts of India to deliver the message to the citizens. As per the news, it is one of India's successful campaigns, where people have realized the benefit of a clean environment, thus reducing the impact of diseases.
Nevertheless, the allocation of budget for the development of artistic features must be limited. The population is surging, and there are other factors of keen importance for betterment of the population. The health care centre, the infrastructure, and modern amenities should not be undermined; as time passes, the investment in these sectors is necessary to prepare for the upcoming future.
Finally, I opine that considering balance in the allocation of the budget as per society's needs can lead to the smooth functioning of the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'personnels'' or 'personnel's'?
Suggestion: personnels'; personnel's
...history of the place or to remember the personnels dedication to societys upbringing. For ...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'statues'?
Suggestion: statues
...re are many Chhatrapati Shivaji Maharaj statue being placed, potraying the immense cha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36477987421 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00034938566 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581761006289 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3309918439 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.352941176 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100168008233 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308874390377 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404474910527 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485616922936 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416031026605 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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