Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is an undeniable fact that, education plays an important role in the development of an individual. A few people, opine that parents are capable enough of providing sufficient education at home, while, on the other hand, a few hold the viewpoint that there is no alternate of school in one’s life. I agree with the fact that, the role of schools is irreplaceable, moreover, the essay describes the benefits of both teaching methodologies.
The fact cannot be denied that, parents are the first teachers of a child, furthermore, they make every possible effort to inculcate human values and discipline in their child’s life. This teaching style, strengthens the emotional bond between the parents and their offspring’s, thereby developing the relationship. Alongside, this associative learning model is of help for both the parents and their children, as they learn attributes such as patience and respect.
Since time immemorial, schools and universities have formed the basis of delivering formal knowledge. Exposing a child to such environment, helps the student to develop cognitive ability, in addition, improves the art of communication with the outside world. The exposure to the challenges at this stage makes an individual confident and prepares him for upcoming unforeseen obstacles in life.
It is evident from the above stated arguments that schools offer a better platform as they are more authentic when delivering knowledge as compared to the informal teaching styles. At the end in the light of the above stated statements, I support the formal teaching strategies, wherein, the children get plethora of opportunities to interact with a lot of other people, besides, are exposed to vast knowledge banks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'few holds'.
Suggestion: few holds
...on at home, while, on the other hand, a few hold the viewpoint that there is no alternat...
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Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...ternate of school in one's life. I agree with the fact that, the role of schools is irreplaceable, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41544117647 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09143522942 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5344812362 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197928870109 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065667658033 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295248394376 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105068684822 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176606801329 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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