Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
it is believed by some people that home is the first place to teach children for their development while some believe that it is most important for them to go to school. parents who are the first teachers for their children helps in improving their health and ultimately leading to happiness. schools are the place where children learn to be competitive by learning new ways of thinking. In this essay I am going to discuss advantages of both the methods and give my opinion.
On one hand, child living in home learn many things such as manners and respecting elders which make them good person in their future. The next big thing involves happiness living with their parents which make them learn a lot of things finally leading to better health with less prone to outside infections. For instance, it is observed that a child spending most of the time outside are exposed to pollution and highly infectious diseases.
while on the other hand, it is believed by some people that children going to school are much more developed with lot of new creative ideas, learning with their colleagues and experimenting new things. they will be exposed to infections which increase their stamina and builds up antibodies to fight against those infections. Consequently, they will lead a better life in this competitive world as observed 85% of the children going to school are most happy then with the children staying at home.
In conclusion, it is observed that even though parents play an important in developing a child’s life but in my opinion going to school increases his educational career making him a respectful person in his future by facing challenges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93950177936 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63969635739 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526690391459 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9906075625 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318306798103 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126350501876 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11990402549 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187794717068 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138900664587 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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